[mike67]

Ok, any Spanish speaking monkeys in here?
I'm trying to translate a birthday card message for my girlfriends mom. Help me out...

Here's the message I would like in the card:

Hi Rose, I hope you have a wonderful birthday. The beautiful flower on this card is a picture that Amanda took in Los Barriles. We need to have a back yard party soon, and celebrate properly!

Here's what I got from a free translation site:

Hola Subió, espero que usted tenga un cumpleaños maravillosos. La flor hermosa en esta tarjeta es un retrato que Amanda aceptó Los Barriles. ¡Necesitamos tener un partido de traspatio pronto, y celebrar apropiadamente!

Is this translation correct?
I thought the name Rose should be Rosa? What do I know...

Can anyone recommend a good free translation site?

Gracias

 

[douglas]

Subió = it raised

 

[mike67]

Subió = it raised

yes, this is what made me suspcious of this translation.
Thanks-

 

[jonKranked]

you don't need to translate proper names.

 

[DRB]

Usted tiene melones maravillosos.

 

[mike67]

Usted tiene melones maravillosos.

Ok so far we have -

Hola Rose, Usted tiene melones maravillosos.

Gracias for that, how about the rest?

 

[BadDNA]

This looks a little better, not saying it's perfect either though 'cause I don't speak Spanish either.

Hola Rose, espero que tengas un cumpleaños maravilloso. La flor hermosa en esta tarjeta es un cuadro que Amanda admitió Los Barriles. ¡Necesitamos tener un partido trasero de la yarda pronto, y celebramos correctamente!

 

[jonKranked]

Usted tiene melones maravillosos.

 

[BadDNA]

Usted tiene melones maravillosos.

 

[BurlyShirley]

Yo clavo una sarchicha para casa del fuego!

 

[mike67]

alright WTF...Hola Rose, Usted tiene melones maravillosos. How come when I read this now it sounds like I'm telling my Girlfriend's mom that she has marvelous melons?

 

[Red Rabbit]

Hello It raised, I hope that you have a wonderful birthday. The beautiful flower in this card is a picture that Amanda accepted the Barrels. Necesitamos to have a party of traspatio soon, and to celebrate appropriately!

 

[DRB]

Hello It raised, I hope that you have a wonderful birthday. The beautiful flower in this card is a picture that Amanda accepted the Barrels. Necesitamos to have a party of traspatio soon, and to celebrate appropriately!

You forgot the part about the cashier's check.

 

[DRB]

alright WTF...Hola Rose, Usted tiene melones maravillosos. How come when I read this now it sounds like I'm telling my Girlfriend's mom that she has marvelous melons?

Don't know what you are talking about but since you brought it up... how are they?

 

[douglas]

alright WTF...Hola Rose, Usted tiene melones maravillosos. How come when I read this now it sounds like I'm telling my Girlfriend's mom that she has marvelous melons?

so, you dont like her melons?

 

[jonKranked]

alright WTF...Hola Rose, Usted tiene melones maravillosos. How come when I read this now it sounds like I'm telling my Girlfriend's mom that she has marvelous melons?

because you are? dunno you might like out and they might be into the mother/daughter tag team

 

[johnbryanpeters]

alright WTF...Hola Rose, Usted tiene melones maravillosos. How come when I read this now it sounds like I'm telling my Girlfriend's mom that she has marvelous melons?

Because you're taking suggestions from the trolls?

 

[vtjim]

because you are? dunno you might like out and they might be into the mother/daughter tag team

that's just not right...

 

[jonKranked]

that's just not right...

neither is telling your gf's mother she has nice mellons in her b-day card

 

[mike67]

Don't know what you are talking about but since you brought it up... how are they?

Well I must say that she does have very nice melons!
My girlfriend and her mom look very much alike...
I've heard people say to take a good long look at your girlfriends mom, because that is a good representation of what she will look like in the future. I would be a lucky man!
No pics though...

 

[mike67]

Because you're no longer taking suggestions from the trolls?

Ok, fixed

I should have known better

 

[reflux]

Muneca, dame la cervesa, cajaro!

 

[ALEXIS_DH]

Ok, any Spanish speaking monkeys in here?
I'm trying to translate a birthday card message for my girlfriends mom. Help me out...

Here's the message I would like in the card:

Hi Rose, I hope you have a wonderful birthday. The beautiful flower on this card is a picture that Amanda took in Los Barriles. We need to have a back yard party soon, and celebrate properly!

Hola Rose/Rosa. Espero que tengas un maravilloso cumpleaños. La bella flor en esta tarjeta es una foto q Amanda tomo en Los Barriles.
Tenemos q hacer una fiesta en el patio pronto, y celebrar como se debe!!!

its somewhat polite. around 6/7 on a 1-jargon/beer-buddies to 10-lawyer-speak scale

 

[bikenweed]

Hola Rose/Rosa. Espero que tengas un maravilloso cumpleaños. La bella flor en esta tarjeta es una foto que Amanda tomo en Los Barriles.
Tenemos que hacer una fiesta en el patio pronto, y celebrar como se debe!!!

its somewhat polite. around 6/7 on a 1-jargon/beer-buddies to 10-lawyer-speak scale

Ditto, I was gonna make the same changes/suggestions. That's the version you wanna go with.

Porfavor, una foto de tu novia, su madre, y los melones de las dos, vale?

 

[mike67]

Hola Rose/Rosa. Espero que tengas un maravilloso cumpleaños. La bella flor en esta tarjeta es una foto q Amanda tomo en Los Barriles.
Tenemos q hacer una fiesta en el patio pronto, y celebrar como se debe!!!

its somewhat polite. around 6/7 on a 1-jargon/beer-buddies to 10-lawyer-speak scale

I ran this through the same translater that I've been using, and it looks better -

Hello Rose/Rose. I expect that have a marvelous birthday. The beautiful flower in this card is a photo q Amanda I take in The Barrels. We have q to do a festival in quick patio, and to celebrate as is owed!!!

 

[niguet]

I ran this through the same translater that I've been using, and it looks better -

Hello Rose/Rose. I expect that have a marvelous birthday. The beautiful flower in this card is a photo q Amanda I take in The Barrels. We have q to do a festival in quick patio, and to celebrate as is owed!!!

Replace the "Q" with "que"

Hola Rose/Rosa. Espero que tengas un maravilloso cumpleaños. La bella flor en esta tarjeta es una foto que Amanda tomo en Los Barriles.
Tenemos que hacer una fiesta en el patio pronto, y celebrar como se debe!!!

So now you cand send it to your girlfriend's mother without a problem